HOOK — First 2 seconds
CHRISTI on camera, direct to lens, no intro:
"I started a mahjong club in Cincinnati because I couldn't find one that felt like me."
No "Hey guys, welcome back." Start mid-sentence. The emotion lands before the algorithm can skip it.
TALKING POINTS (Christi speaks naturally to these)
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What was missing: "I wanted somewhere that wasn't intimidating. Where beginners were actually welcome, not just tolerated."
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The first night: "The first Tuesday we opened, [X people] showed up. I didn't expect that."
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What surprised you: "What surprised me was how fast strangers became regulars. This game does something to people."
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Who it's for: "I built it for women who want to do something for themselves. Not a class, not a drink, not a workout. Just tiles, a table, and real conversation."
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The invitation: "If that sounds like your kind of Tuesday, come find us. I'll be there."
BODY COPY (word-for-word draft — Christi should adapt in her own voice)
"I started a mahjong club in Cincinnati because I couldn't find one that felt like me. Every group I found was either too competitive, too cliquey, or just not beginner-friendly. I figured if I felt that way, other people probably did too.
So I rented a space, put out some tables, and said — come Tuesday. I'll teach you if you need it, and I'll find you a table if you don't know anyone.
Two years later, we fill those tables every single week. First-timers who walked in nervous and left with plans to come back. Regulars who've taught their daughters, their coworkers, their moms.
If you've been curious about mahjong — or just looking for a Tuesday night that actually makes you feel something — come find us. The door's always open."
CTA
❤️
"Link in bio — every Tuesday, all levels, walk-ins welcome"
No hard sell after a personal story. One soft line is enough. The story already closed it.
PRODUCTION NOTES
Film this once and it'll live forever. Sit at one of the mahjong tables with tiles in the background — not a blank wall. Natural daylight or warm indoor lighting. Phone on a tripod at eye level. Talk to the camera like you're talking to a friend who asked you about the club at a coffee shop. If you flub a line, just keep going — jump cuts are normal and authentic. This Reel will outperform every other one you post. It only needs to exist once.